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Jane Thomson-Copywriter

Copywriting sample:
Why do I sound better in the car?

I’m pretty proud of this one.

I racked my brain trying to come up with an eye-catching offer in this overcrowded niche. Most of my ideas were along the lines of:

“How to sing with power.”
“How to belt without straining.”
“How to improve your tone even when you’re nervous.”
Etc.

This just shows the value of coming up with a first draft quickly, no matter how bad or incoherent. Then… it simmers. You never know what might bubble up from your unconscious. I was singing along in the car one day, wondering why I always sounded so much better in the car.

That’s it!

I found my perfect headline. Everything flowed from there… the body, the bullets, and ending with a compelling offer.

I had just cleaned my list before sending this, so I was down to less than 300 people. But I managed to get about 10 sales from it over the course of the month.

I can only imagine how much better it would be to a list of thousands of hot prospects!

 

Why You Always Sing Better in the Car…

 

 

And what you can do right now so that you always sound your best, no matter how nervous you feel…

 

By JT
Monday 9:00 pm

Dear Singer Who’s Much More Talented Than You Think,

There seems to be something magical about singing in the car or shower, doesn’t it? When you’re in your own small space, completely separate from everyone and everything else, your voice opens up and flows effortlessly.  What if there was a way you could flush out that hidden ability and be able to sing with that magic in your voice any time you wanted?

This is JT, and I’ve gone crazy and back again trying to discover the secrets of getting unstuck in singing and finally making progress.

I’ve spent years and invested thousands of dollars in my Classical voice training. And even though these lessons did provide me with a solid foundation for a powerful voice, the rigid structure stifled my creativity and almost killed off my love for music.

So proper, so rigid… So not like what I wanted when I signed up for lessons!

Sadly, this happens a lot.

But for some reason, when you sing in the car or in the shower –
Magic Happens!

Inhibition is gone. Free expression takes over and your voice just flows like honey.

I’ve developed a program called “Why Do I Sing Better in the Car?  to help you have this level of performance any time. You’ll be able to tap into that hidden talent and on cue, be able to sing with the same warmth and richness you have in the car anywhere you want.

I’ve got to warn you though, it is kind of off the wall (would you expect anything else from me?)

Listen and discover fascinating truths about your voice and learning that will forever change the way you think about singing.

You’ll see how easy it can be to draw out your natural voice and experience how much more interesting it is than the rigid, stuffy technique you’re currently breaking your back to learn.

Once you start playing around with your natural voice, improving your singing will never again feel like an uphill battle.  Instead of trying to mold your voice and force it in a direction it doesn’t want to go, you can relax, let go and let your voice soar.  Years of stress and struggle melt away.

In just 26 minutes, “Why Do I Sound Better in the Car” will helps you:

  • * Ensure you never sing below your true potential again. This even works if you’re a nervous wreck!
  • * Discover how to get into a state of mind perfect for improving your singing quickly. This 5 minute technique is so easy… and it’s fun to boot.
  • * Recreate the feeling and the flow you get when singing in the car. These 5 quick, simple exercises are the polar opposite of the monotonous exercises you usually have to do. They are fun – and they work
  • * Make a simple change in your breathing can improve your singing right now. This has nothing to do with “singing from the diaphragm”.
  • * Get a warmer, richer, fuller sound almost instantly with the “White Noise” technique
  • * Discover why kids usually learn to sing so much faster, and now you can too
  • * One crazy, bizarre way to get more power in your voice with no forcing or straining at all.
  • * Bring back the joy and love of singing and use that joy as a tool for fast improvement.

Improve Your Singing Faster with This Million Dollar Secret

One of the greatest secrets to learning anything faster is to combine both visual and auditory learning. That’s why “Why Do I Sing Better in the Car?” comes as a 26 minute audio that you can listen to and digest anywhere. Plus, you’ll also get a written transcript so you can follow along visually.

And you’ll get a one page cheat sheet that you can tape to the wall as you’re practicing to deeply engrain these unusual but incredibly effective singing methods into your unconscious.

As soon as you start doing these simple exercises, you’ll begin to notice your voice feeling and sounding a little more magical.

 

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You Could Spend Hundreds of Dollars on Voice Lessons and
Still Never Discover these Unique Methods

When I add up the amount of money I’ve invested in singing lessons over the years, it works out to more than $10,000. Ouch!

And I still never learned the incredible secrets you get in “Why Do I Sing Better in the Car?,” which you can get right now for only $7.

That, my friend, is a steal.

This is priced so low for three reasons:

1.) To thank you for being such a great subscriber

2.) Because I want to spare you the frustration I went through, wasting so much time and money without getting the results I wanted.  This is my way of making this method affordable for anyone who wants it badly enough.

And I’ll confess, there’s one selfish reason. You can grab it right now for only $7 is that I’m hoping you will love it so much that you’ll want to get your hands on everything I offer.

If you are at all serious about singing with freedom…

Of singing effortlessly and joyously instead of having to struggle, then you should take advantage of this deal right now.

Just click the Add to Cart Button below. Your order will be safely and securely processed by PayPal, and you’ll be able to download “Why Do I Sing Better in the Car” instantly. You can start singing with more freedom, more joy and more magic right now, even if it’s 3:00 in the morning.

These strange and bizarre techniques to great singing are likely more effective and more powerful than anything you’ve ever tried. They are without a doubt a lot more fun! I am sure you are going to love the way you sound after you try the drills for a couple of weeks.

And if you don’t?  No problem.  I’ve got you covered.

 

Your PowerfulSinging.Com Complete Satisfaction Guarantee

 

Try “Why Do I Sing Better in the Car?” for 60 days.  Record your voice on day one.  Compare it with how you sound on day 60.  And if you are not ecstatic over how far you’ve come, then I don’t want a dime.

Just send a quick message and I’ll promptly refund every penny.  No hassles.  No questions asked.

The only way you can lose is if you don’t try “Why Do I Sing Better in the Car?” right now! 

 

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I know from personal experience how frustrating and disheartening it is to feel like you have talent inside you, but can’t get it out no matter how hard you try. It’s more than frustrating – it’s painful.

Now you can bypass all of that frustration and pain because you’ll discover outstanding new ways to access the warmth, flow and beauty inherent in your voice any time you want.

Try it now!  You have nothing to lose, and a whole new world of potential to gain.

Knock ’em Dead!

 

JT
www.siteremoved.com

 

P.S. I recorded myself singing one of my own songs on my Mac last week. 

Then I tried the “White Noise” exercise for about half an hour. When I recorded myself again, I couldn’t believe how much more relaxed and flowing my voice sounded – after only one session! 

That’s just one of six exercises you’ll discover in “Why Do I Sound Better in the Car?”. These techniques give you six superb exercises that will draw out your natural talent unlike anything you’ve ever tried.

That’s a heck of a lot of value for only $7!

 

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